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Faith and Disease
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Faith and Disease |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Faith and Disease Inside the light burns a relentless night It was always about doing what’s right Never about what doing what you like I’d let in the light, but is much too bright Instead I’ll sit freezing in my lovely night Devoid of faith, once again comes the blight Creeping in, the disease of wrong and right ------------- Darkness do drown me, Light do burn me, Oblivion do welcome me |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
wonderful piece keep it up and i long to read more from you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is a very opressive poem. It has a very strong "there is no way out" feel. Very powerful. I especially admire this line : Inside the light burns a relentless night p.s. I love your name! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
One can almost sense the darkness Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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