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Dark Poetry #2

Fantasies at the Beach

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

0 posted 2000-06-26 06:42 AM

I sit, here
on the sand.

Look out
at the surf
lapping at my feet.

Look over
at the sun
sliding into the ocean.

Look up
at the stars
starting to twinkle.

(I sigh)

I lay back
into the soft sand.

The surf laps
up to my waist.

(I sigh)

Gently it laps
and
laps.

Over my mouth
my nose.

I close my eyes.

(I sigh my last sigh)

Now I twinkle,
in the sky.

~ Tara ~

PS: Not that I would EVER do this... I was just having some fun playing with words and a different style...

I LOVE life to the fullest!

LuckyinLove
Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 57
Australia

1 posted 2000-06-26 08:13 AM

Wow, you wait to you here some of my gloomy poems I wrote them a while ago and Im still here, I think its because I put it to paper and never followed through, because once I wrote it the thoughts were out of my head. Its good how you can write such things when you are so happy.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

2 posted 2000-06-26 11:49 AM

to close to home for me Tara, I nearly drownd one time, very close to home.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-27 01:22 AM

great piece and i do very much like the style.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

4 posted 2000-06-27 04:42 AM

A wonderful poem. The sea has that savage lure, somehow.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

5 posted 2000-06-27 04:50 AM

It could very well be a statement on apathetic behaviour then, since the intent was not self destruction....lol
Very nice work

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

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