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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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Am I doomed to be a nomad In a land of settlers? Am I doomed to wander Aimlessly, Watching others have direction? It seems I am destined for a Solitary destiny. And Fate just laughs at me. This knowledge is slowly Sinking in, And now the question I pose Is this: Do I accept the solitude and Castle built for one, Or fight it all until My last breath drawn? I could win many battles, But fear the war has long been lost. *****kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Oh Kynder We march to the beat of different Drummers. We All have our Battles We all have our wars Lonliness captures alot of us But I think you will win the war and continue on never give up !!!! I know lonliness traps me alot and I have to fight it. I relate to so much of your work You are so talented. And so feeling I think only people with deep emotions can write like this You are great! Keep it uP Bluebrdy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
HELL NO, you should not accept the castle for one. We all deserve a castle for two. Keep fighting. Fight on till the end. I will if you will Catalinamoon |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i don't know about the castle for two i like to have alot of space for my things. great poem my friend and if i've told you a milllion times don't give up cause i'm here to fight with you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I know that feeling too. And though I'm prone to taking the easy option myself (not bothering) I know it's better to fight! Great imagery, great poem. As always! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
The real tragedy would be to give in. Beautiful, well written and thoughtful poem. Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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