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What If I Was To Tell You?
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What If I Was To Tell You? |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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What if I was to tell you..... I am falling in love? Would you run away... think twice about us? Could I dare to love you with all of my might? Would you run away... from my love in fright? What if I surrendered my heart... with a burning passion so bright? Would you turn away from passions light deny your feelings with an internal fight? I would to love thee with my every cell to you alone all my secrets tell! Yes, love takes two who feel the same and realize in each other what they gain To gain you is my one desire For you alone created this temptious fire! I am burning for you my love, it is true I hope the same is true for you! |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
I think i know exactly what u are trying to say here ... or rather, u have captured this really well. Great job! ~verve |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Illusion: I'm sure that if he reads your words, he'll think twice about passing up such a passionate plea! nicely done! -Tier |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Verve....I tried to make it as plain as possible, if possible when expressing such emotions! Thanks for reading and getting it! Tiersdin...Thank you! Your most kind, and I hope your right!  |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Nicely written..I know we all have that question in our hearts What If?????? He feels the same Tell him Girl...What are you waiting for?? -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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