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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN 
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I regret falling in love with him, holding on to my hopes and dreams. I regret telling him how I felt inside and letting him get to know me. I regret laying in bed every night crying, thinking if he was here he'd love me back. I regret not being able to let go so easy and believing the lie that I told myself. I regret talking to him on the phone at night even though I knew he got a girlfriend. I regret crying while I wrote this because it means that I still care I'll regret talking to him later on tonight still holding on to my hopes, dreams and lies. I'll regret the day he completely leaves me, thinking that I was over him and didn't care. BUT... Unlike him or the girl hes with I'll never have the chance to regret Me being me. This aint the best but it tells the story  Don't fear failure so much that you refuse to try new things. The saddest summary of a life contains three descriptions: could have, might h |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Open and honest. Well written. Love the ending, "I'll never have the chance to regret Me being me." With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
This is superb. Very well done...great timing, well constructed, great topic....Exceptional. I'm glad I looked. Hardrock |
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