Dark Poetry #2 |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA ![]() |
Inspiration fails me at the start, Taking away my poetic art, Binding me in a spell that bursts, Haunting my mind with a poets curse, Having me seek my beloved words, With each one found diminishing the hurt. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
This is really cool ... I know just what u mean in those lines. =) verve |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Xeo....So true, that pain you feel when the words won't come. I think we all take spells like that....but only the true poets agonize over it so. Hardrock |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
A painful thing to experience indeed. You captured the feelings well in your poem, excellent work! -Tier |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes i have been there alot..know exactly what you mean... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Xeonox: I know exactly what you mean. This is one of the most frustrating things in my life, too. It is especially frustrating, and agonizing, when I feel pain elsewhere in life, but the words just won't come when I want to write about it. |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I am glad I wrote this poem. I see that many of you are in the same boat as I am. fractal007, you hit the mark. Right now I am unable to write any poetry. It has been over two to three weeks. I am just going to hang in their and so should you. ![]() Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A lost poet soon to be found, and once he's found true happiness will take into form. Good luck! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... can relate to this! And it gets frustrating sometimes when no words will come forth... and then to have the blessed relief that just one line will give! ![]() ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Xeonox, *HuGS* and here are some words for you for when you don't have any ...superb, with verve, zestful, zany not to many...wait there's more... encore! encore. Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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