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Dark Poetry #2

Inferno

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2000-12-04 02:44 AM

Inferno

Shards of words
smashed against a wall,
an exploding nova
of raw emotions
that had
once been a
systemized order
of frangible letters,

Cataclysmic dispersion

Fiery
projectiles
of quasar syllables
scatter haphazardly,
littering
sterile tile floor..

Cold, bloody
rivulets of anger
run thickly
red
to create
a dark, staining
puddle,
seeping deep
into
cracks.

© 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa(All rights reserved)

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~
Aloha with
warmest regards,
K

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

1 posted 2000-12-04 11:24 AM

Ooo, very nice

I like it!

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

firecrakker
Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 235
Virginia

2 posted 2000-12-04 01:27 PM

Stunning visual!!! I, too, like it.

Sheila

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

3 posted 2000-12-04 04:46 PM

Good poem. I loved the astronomical references!

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