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drink my mother drink
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Drink my mother drink, Slip away to your happy times Times long gone by Drink my mother if only to forget Forget the pain and your sorrow For it will all be back tomorrow Drink my mother let it go Let go of the regret And don’t bother with what you never did Drink my mother drink Be happy and remember the ones you left Left behind like unwanted doles Drink my mother drink And don’t worry about me I will be ok Drink my mother drink For I never knew you anyway Never were you there to care Drink my mother drink Let it all be washed away All the time you missed Drink mother drink I will fined my own way Not that you ever noticed any way Drink my mother drink But I pray that you see one day All you missed Drink my mother drink I pry that I may never be Like you one day [This message has been edited by raleighbttrfly (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
So sad a poem I hope you aren't like her either. Been there seen that. Suzanne |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
thank your for respones suzzan. I am nothing like my other as far as having a drinking problem gose, but my mother and I are now geting along and working on are relationship. She was pulled for a DWI not to long ago and hasent had a srink sinse I'm happy to say. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
*sniff* I can understand the pain in this poem... although not with a mother... but, nevertheless... I can understand. Well written. Take care. ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very powerful. Dark and sad, and well said. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
raleighbttrfly, you wrote life and it shows. Great poem and astounding sentiments. Write on Kethry [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe there is always a day of truth and from that day forth she will see her mistakes...you have seen your day of truth...you are determined not to have the same problem...James |
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