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JOY 14
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0 posted 2000-11-26 11:09 AM


Trickle down
   everything
trickle down
the dawn
    SUN
r e a c h ing
clouds covering
Rain..
swept away
the
day

This one's untitled. Can anyone help me find one?
Thanks.
Joy

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1 posted 2000-11-26 05:40 PM


Joy~
I like this and I think that actually
Trickle Down would be a most appropriate title.

Enjoyable read.
~*Marge*~


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JOY 14
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2 posted 2000-11-26 07:54 PM


Thanks Marge. I was thinking about that but was uncertain because I usualy cop out and always title my poems from the first line. But it does fit.

Joy

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