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Why Me???? |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Why do you think this happened? To someone like me. Why do you think things are like this? Just come in and see. Why do you think it's my fault? whenever something happens to you. Why do you think I hate you? There's nothing I can do. Why do you think I'm like this? Twisted with the world's pain. Why do you think I try so hard? When there's nothing to gain. Why do you think I want to help? when I hear how you are. Why do you think I know so much? You say it seems so far. Why do you think I do this? when the reason's plain to see. If you were to leave this Earth alone, I'd wonder why me?? ******************************************************************************************************** Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Just made this up. Hope it meets y'lls approval. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Wow!! I like it very much!! Will read it again!!! Make up another one please! Tanx!! Click |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Wonderfull writing again there my friend. "Why do you think I try so hard? When there's nothing to gain." This line says it all. keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thank you much for replying to my poem!!!!!!!!! |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
I must return the thought.. this is the first of yours that I've read, as well...For just making it up, you've done a great job! It's a real thinker.. Sheila  Life is a journey.. not a destination.. - unknown |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
you know what i think of your writing, You know you're talented. So keep on writing or i'll sob.....and believe me.....im a nasty sobber.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
dopey: you crack me up man! I love you! well g2g! school, blah! Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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