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In the Fog |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Who looks out, silent And sees through the fog so thick, Who lurks there, patient. Wait and see Who comes by, laughing, And walk with feet light and quick, Who knows not, lurking. Waits for he A shape in the fog so thick, Motionless, Blocking the joyful travel, He stops smiling and walking, Motionless, The world will never restart, Then with a motion too quick, The darkness, Sweeps over and will prevail, All without ever talking, Fog’s darkness, Plunges deep into his heart. Who goes in, silent And flees through the fog so thick, Who lurks there, patient. Let’s go see. Gloom 2000 CK#3 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Gloom, Who? Who? I need to know. Misty and eeerie write. I loved it Write on Kethry. Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. All i Can say is OOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooo!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Kethry The who is a character of mine called The Contract Killer Of which I have several poems written about. This is his third kill, as counting goes, My site used to have the series, but I took it off to rework; Perhaps soon I’ll have it completed. Thank you, Dopey_Dope, Glad you liked it. Gloom |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
it's a dark. damp day here. it was foggy last night. now i don't want to go out alone! *shivvers* i really liked this. the imagery was chilling, and perfect for the forum of darkness. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Jannel, I am glad you liked my words. Yes I must agree, the Dark is the proper place For my writing At least here I get a few shivers. Gloom |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! Terrific!  I kept on looking over my shoulder as I read each line  ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Dark and wonderful, I don't believe I've read the prior two of The Contract Killer, but this has the feel of an opening or beginning. I could see a man, dark and shadowed, could feel his evil, and I finished the read wanting more, a novel perhaps (got in ya to write one? )This was good. If you get the first ones reworked, please post them, I want to read!!! With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, taramw I am glad you enjoyed Just keep telling yourself It’s only a poem… It’s only a poem… It’s only a poem… It’s only Thank you, dragonpoe, There are several already written I am still working on a few, But perhaps I’ll post another completed series Bit by bit Gloom |
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