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PureM Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22London, UK |
Everytime I think of you, It brings tears to my eyes, Just the other morning, We were together, watching the sunrise. Holding each other tightly, Talking and laughing, maybe a kiss or two, Forever in my heart, Is where I'll keep you Even though we are now apart, And your heart I no longer touch, Your soul is still the reason, My love light shines so much. Never forget... M |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
PureM, Oh WOW!!! Every girl should have the privilege of hearing these words. Very nice!  Sheila |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
*sigh* Beautiful piece Matt Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Woow man, this was a really good poem! Woooow  Your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Ya know, every girl that reads this is going to wish it was written about her! VERY well done, I love it ~ especially the last lines...I am a sucker for powerful closings in poems You're good at this romantic stuff hun - keep it up ok? Anyways, there is much to say but I'll save it for my next novel-long email lol. Keep writing and all the best alwaysLove ya lots Kristin ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... w |
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PureM Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22London, UK |
Thanks Sheila, Tara, Caz and Kristin! I'm flattered! I just wish the girl I wrote it for felt the same way. Love Matt |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
this is a really good poem, it almost made me cry it reminds me of me and my ex we watched the sunrise on the beach one morning and the next he dumped me this is very good thanx for posting it "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Soft and sweet. Very nice With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Matt .. This is so sweet ... Very lovely words ... ~verve |
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