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a little haiku, i think???
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a little haiku, i think??? |
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marcos New Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 8 |
My cyber heart beats Anxiously as I wait to Reinvent myself |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcos~ This is an excellent piece. It would accurately be considered a Senryu, which follows the same syllabic count as the Haiku. Haiku usually deals with elements of nature and Senryu with emotions or other subjects. The syllable count is perfect and I enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great! Oh and BTW.....your name is my brothers name......just a little useless info. Anyway GREAT!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
a senryu, but a good one!  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
loved reading this one too. Charisma |
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