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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-11-24 06:46 PM


The silence fills my ears
with imagined sounds
Of a long ago voice
of a fragile love
Tis only I that hears
the softly spoken words
Like a tranquil melody
of a cooing dove

Softly whispered on
my attentive ears
Words flow sweetly on a
heart eager to claim
That his love is still new
as that first kiss
Instilled in my heart
like a comforting flame

Though stubborn of mind
it does not see
The fire slowly ebbing
on a heart growing colder
Smothered by words
it no longer hears
Memories fade and
time grows older

Left with only silence
to fill the void
The silence of words
no longer spoken
Echoing off the vast
emptiness inside
The eerie quiet
of a heart now broken





[This message has been edited by Suzanne Arlene (edited 11-25-2000).]

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EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2000-11-25 08:06 AM


I liked this one, especially taken by the last verse. Great!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-11-25 01:05 PM


Geeze, Louise, Suzanne....What a poem!!  I'll bet there are many out there who hear those same sounds of silence.  This one makes my heart ache...I wish I could wrap my arms around you and all the rest and tell you that it's gonna get better....someday.  Hardrock
firecrakker
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since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
3 posted 2000-11-25 11:32 PM


Suzanne,

As ironic as "words" of silence seem, it's amazing how they speak volumes, isn't it? I thought you expressed this very well! Great write!

Sheila

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