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PureM Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22London, UK |
You broke me When you said We wont happen Why is it I still run and jump to your beat I try to get away Reclaim my runaway Diseased heart And mind Yet my pulse races And I shake With hope and trepidation When you suggest we meet We are so close Your friendship Something so special! No one knows me better I love and cherish it its so sure, But I still want more Deep down I know I wont get you But I still feel you, Stop this nonesense I go crazy everytime I see you, When these feelings come to fore Don’t let me ruin our friendship It is so pure So many honesties And secrets We both let out Oh please Lets give this A shout! I think too much I need time But time wont Take away my feelings Your smile Sparkling eyes Curving hips Make me hot And leave me seething We are amazing… Together! I, have never. Talked to anyone Like I can to you But now I have Said too much You know me Too well! You are the one! I don’t want anybody Else Ever How can this be When I Cant have you You said You ARE attracted to me Act on it! You don’t deny it But still you Don’t do anything Why not Take my love Its no commitment Let me show you! How much I love you. M |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
PureM... lovely poem! You expressed something so real very well  I hope it all works out for you. Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Hey there....well ya know all those compliments you gave me in your email? Well, they all apply to you too! You are such a good writer! I'm glad you told me about this poem. It's so open and honest...I wish guys I knew were that straight forward with their feelings. This was very nicely done. Is it about that girl who won't open up to you? Keep in touch and keep writing ~Kristin ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can...wit |
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PureM Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22London, UK |
Tara ~ thank you for the well wishes! Kristin ~ You are already an inspiration, I mailed you back! Thanks for the read Matt |
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