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PureM
Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22
London, UK

0 posted 2000-11-24 12:34 PM


You broke me
When you said
We wont happen
Why is it
I still run and jump to your beat

I try to get away
Reclaim my runaway
Diseased heart
And mind
Yet my pulse races
And I shake
With hope and trepidation
When you suggest we meet

We are so close
Your friendship
Something so special!
No one knows me better
I love
and cherish it
its so sure,
But I still want more

Deep down
I know I wont get you
But I still feel you,
Stop this nonesense
I go crazy everytime
I see you,
When these feelings come to fore

Don’t let me ruin our friendship
It is so pure
So many honesties
And secrets
We both let out
Oh please
Lets give this
A shout!

I think too much
I need time
But time wont
Take away my feelings
Your smile
Sparkling eyes
Curving hips
Make me hot
And leave me seething

We are amazing…
Together!
I, have never.
Talked to anyone
Like I can to you
But now I have
Said too much
You know me
Too well!

You are the one!
I don’t want anybody
Else
Ever
How can this be
When I
Cant have you

You said
You ARE attracted to me
Act on it!
You don’t deny it
But still you
Don’t do anything
Why not
Take my love
Its no commitment
Let me show you!
How much
I love you.

M

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taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-11-24 05:56 PM


PureM... lovely poem!  You expressed something so real very well    I hope it all works out for you.  Take care.
~ Tara ~


"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Kandi
Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell
2 posted 2000-11-24 08:55 PM


Hey there....well ya know all those compliments you gave me in your email? Well, they all apply to you too! You are such a good writer! I'm glad you told me about this poem. It's so open and honest...I wish guys I knew were that straight forward with their feelings. This was very nicely done. Is it about that girl who won't open up to you?
Keep in touch and keep writing
~Kristin


~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~Won't you come and hold my hand?
This world has taken me as far as it can...wit

PureM
Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22
London, UK
3 posted 2000-11-25 04:06 PM


Tara ~ thank you for the well wishes!

Kristin ~ You are already an inspiration, I mailed you back!

Thanks for the read  
Matt

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