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My Last serve. . . (Apprehensive of what he'll face)
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My Last serve. . . (Apprehensive of what he'll face) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Apprehensive of what he'll face, he opens that door the door to his heart that has been closed for so long the door that she now knocks at wanting to be let in there are all the old memories that he doesn't want to face all the old loves that just seem out of place all the old feelings that he never put away all of the old words that he never got to say he wonders why she wants to come in here to see the remnants of his love she doesn't want to see that she wants to see his heart she knows that he has one she knows that he can love her as she loves him the door opens. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Sven~~It is always so risky to let hurtful people back into our lives...Nice work, hope you are O.K..... ~Sash~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Nice to see that the door opened. Nice poem - easy to read  Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"All the old loves that just seem out of place." Sven really fascinating those six lines in the middle of this poem.. Sometimes we have to clean and rearrange our hearts in preparation for a new relationship or new love...yes...James |
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