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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
waterlillies you are the music that moves my soul, the strings that cry out my name. the softness of the ivory keys, so delicately played within my heart. tempted by the chorus of the love i feel, i long to hold you and caress you, as a musician to the violin. preciously drifting through the night air, i feel your presence radiate through me. the earth stands still at your sound, clouds part and give way to you. the ocean gently moves with the rhythm, that is evoked by the music of your love. i stand in awe watching the world lay down at your feet, bowing gracefully to accept your beauty. you darling, are the music of my heart. the waterlillies dance beneath the starlit skies, as the moon serenades you. and i too, dance with you in my arms. mojar |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
oh my god...this was so beautiful....it was so cute...awww....if this was written for someone in mind..you should definetly give it to them...i loved this piece! great job! MiSeRyDivine |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
wow.. I'd like to be on the receiving end of a poem like this!  ...very nice.Sheila |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I have to agree with the two comments above mine. This is very warm, charming, lovingly sweet and wonderful. Words to melt the heart. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
thank you for such nice comments, it is very much appreciated. mojar |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The waterlillies dance beneath the starlit skies, as the moon serenades you." My favorite lines...James |
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