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Dark Poetry #2

out of control

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 2000-11-16 06:31 PM

losing sight of my destiny,
spinning wildly out of control.
lost so deep within myself,
my grasp is letting go.

what is real and what is not,
should i stay or should i leave.
assuming what is left of me,
or the things that i percieve.

my only guide to lead me on,
this journey that i take.
is the trust i have within myself,
and decisions that i make.

to feel so helpless without a goal,
answers i have none.
to look inside this empty soul,
i turn my head and run.

but just how far do i run,
before i take control.
no one guides my destiny,
save my mortal soul.

mojar

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

1 posted 2000-11-16 08:34 PM

Felt this had a quiet honesty and a powerful depth. You've expressed your emotions really well.

To capture and live a moment is truly living

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

2 posted 2000-11-16 08:50 PM

thank you dreamkeeper, your comment expresses a lot more than one would think. mojar

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