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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-11-16 12:27 PM


This is for Jesse Jaymz--My heart aches for you my friend.  There are good things in life. You just need to look for them.

Broken Angel

Is there ever true perfection?
A purity that has no shadow?
Some question my go unanswered
Living without affection.

As tears lay on your cheeks
You feel life has no meaning
Sadden by your heart ache
It’s happiness you seek.

Cruel as love may seem to be
I can hear your painful sighs
Blinded by your sorrow
Confused you cannot see.

Words I offer  so you can begin
Words I feel are true.
The happiness you look for
Must come from  inside of you.



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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



© Copyright 2000 Kathy Harmon - All Rights Reserved
Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
1 posted 2000-11-16 12:36 PM


kitkat
*hugs*  i was replying to my poem and i seen this one.  broken angel sure caught my eye so i went to check it out.  and its about me.     thank you for your sweet words hun.  it means alot to me that people care about me.  especialy right now.  for this is right around the time that me and wanda starting going out last year.  so its a hard time in this angels life.  i hope that i can make it through.  and with friends like you in my life i knowit will be alot easier.  thank you so much.  *hugs and kisses*
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

Celeste
Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

2 posted 2000-11-16 08:50 PM


very beautiful and so very true.  Powerful ending.  You have a very giving heart.  

To capture and live a moment is truly living

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