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Lonely Photograph |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
It all began with a photo of you, and the love that I have too. Everytime I see it my heart will melt, it’s because of all the feeling I felt. And still do feel, but it all seems unreal. If God’s there is he cruel? why can’t I be with you? Everyday without you a blow is thrown, how can God leave us so alone? But I believe He gives us all we get, otherwise I don’t think we would’ve met. During storms we’re under his tent, cuz our love’s heaven sent. But He made us so far apart, and everyday it just breaks my heart. All the time I sit and wonder why, I always feel I want to cry. The feelings that bring me down so low, bring me back to your beautiful photo. Now I have two or three, and it’s more of you I see. You with me is my only dream, the sight of you makes me gleam. Us together forever is my fantasy, and I wonder can it be? I know you love me too, and I know you’ll be true. And it all brings me to, the photo I have of you. 24/7 is when your on my mind, in everything but you, I’m falling behind. I don’t quite know what you see in me, you broke down my wall and straight to my heart you see, maybe that’s how you see what it is you see in me. But every time I doubt I look deep inside and know, and tears bring me back to my only love’s photo. I hope someday, we’ll be a permanent two, but until that day I’ll always be in love with you. I know it sounds weird and maybe a little nuts, but my heart aches and longs, for your touch. I want to give you hugs and fill your life with kisses, cuz my lonely heart is sayin, it’s you it misses. I love you too much to ever let you go, and every time I’m down I come back to my photo. It’s you I live and breathe for, even in my death I’ll always love you more. If I ever doubt, I remember out love is true, and that will always bring me, to the photo I have of you. " If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown Thy Wizard |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
WOW this is only the second peice of work if yours that i have read and its like you know me. i think this all the time and in my head i have said this poem before a hundred times. please e-mail me. i am in tears once again. great great peice my friend peace love and rock and roll, jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great work. I simply am astound by your creative writing. I am the dark one, but you are the light giver.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
A sweet, honest piece, opening your heart with such gentle words... With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem.....i really liked this piece! keep on posting.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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