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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2000-11-14 11:12 PM


Let me be your Phylis Diller
your Mime Bobeck  too
Take a good long look and see
I Just want to be friends with you

Can't you see my funny hair,
my wild and crazy flowered dress.
My eyeshadows  shade of blue
I think it's just the best

Let me be your Phylis Diller
I will let you comb my hair
You can be my Fang
and wear blue underwear

So let your guards go down
take my hand and laugh with me
I know your pain runs deep
but I can't hurt you,you see

Let me be your Phylis Diller
I'll make your sweet face smile
Think of all the fun we'll have
Even if it's only for awhile




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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-11-15 08:03 AM


Sooo cute..loved it..made me smile this morning..

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


dragonpoe
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2 posted 2000-11-15 08:45 AM


While reading this, I could hear Stevie Nicks singing this piece, bluesy and with a flair of attitude. I liked it  
Though I have to admit, I have no idea who Phylis Diller is.

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-11-15 02:31 PM


I thought this poem was great, but I too do not know who Phylis DIller is......oh my ignorance is great this week!

Doh!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Suzanne Arlene
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Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-11-15 02:46 PM


I am not that old  LOL   Phylis Diller use to be in movies with Bob Hope  . She is a Comedien with way out hair and she would smoke cigerettes in holders   and talk about fang her man.  Thanks for the responses though  lol

[This message has been edited by Suzanne Arlene (edited 11-15-2000).]

Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
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Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-11-15 02:47 PM


Mime Bobeck is Mime from Drew Carrey Either image will do lol
Jannel
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Muncie, IN, USA
6 posted 2000-11-16 10:31 PM


the title caught me. i loved it. way to have fun with poetry!

jann elizabeth

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