»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #2
»
Waiting.....
| Dark Poetry #2 |
|
Waiting..... |
|
|
Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
|
Watching out my window Staring at the stars above Dreaming of seeing your eyes Yearning to feel your love Wanting to carress your face Needing to touch your skin Begging for some happiness So we can create some sins  The stars are shining brightly The moon is full as can be Memorized by the brightness Your face I can surely see Yet the long of your touch Is what I want to feel Holding each other tight Making happiness become real But time keeps us apart That part I really hate But soon you will be mine And for that.. I can surely wait!  No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Mags - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Sweet love.......I truly enjoyed! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
||
|
firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Very nice write, DkW!!!! I hope you don't have to wait long.  Sheila Life is a journey.. not a destination.. - unknown |
||
|
firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
*swoooons* Hey you know for someone who never inks their stuff, you are too damn good Trust me *with such an evil, yet ornry wink* this one truly spoke to me baby Thank you!Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
||
|
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Lovely, heartfelt words, I can identify with the ache of the slow passing of time, and being apart. Regards, Olias |
||
|
Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I just love it when I go back and find a "gem" like this one, that somehow I overlooked. YOU are such a snuggle-bunny....I could just squeeze you. Well done. Hardrock |
||
|
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ache is definately the right word to describe the feeling of this, and you do it very well! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
||
|
Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
*sighs* ... i can really relate to this ... how so often we do long for that someone to be near ... u have done this so very nicely ... =) ~verve |
||
|
qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awww what a beautiful poem --i luved it--great work LOVE ELMO <3 |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sweet love and longing, makes any reader's heart ache with the same wanting for that feeling... Well done! Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
||
|
MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
This poem made my heart melt  unfortunetly i know this feeling to well |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
