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MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

0 posted 2000-11-13 11:16 PM

She walks into
halls of frozen crystal
moonlit rays fall from heaven
creating beams of white light
reflecting off the delicate haven
into her shimmering mirrored eyes
Such pureness grows here
a truth can clearly be seen
Beyond the halls she hears
the sounds of shattering glass
down the corridor she runs
till she reaches a large opening
a strong gust of cold wind
confronts her presence
in front of her lies the ocean
free flowing perfected beauty
radiates from its inner core
she steps toward it
her feet touching a puddle
on the diamond sand
confused, she stares
intricate patterns of metallic silver
begin to dance inside it
pulling her into its void
shes amazed, falling to the ground
her long white skirt soaked
the ocean waves crash against the shore
shattering into nothing as it should
producing enchanting melodies
taking her away to paradise
surrendering her serenity
she lies here in perfection
waiting for his soul
inhaling the scent of fresh roses
she collapses in a heap
where the water meets land
days pass and yet she lay still
wings of winter divinity
protrude from her back
her fingers frozen by the ice
a warmth felt, unknown
she awakens from her dreamscape
Paralyzed and unable to speak
she sees him walking toward her
Love overfills her frozen soul
thawing away her sadness, madness
she flys to him
he takes her hand in his
and they walk to together
on the shores of a delicate
undisturbed angelic paradise
in love, reunited
for eternity

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-11-14 12:41 PM

I usually hate reading long poems, but your I enjoyed every word, every letter. Great work.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

2 posted 2000-11-14 11:10 PM

aw why thankyou Xeonox....

you're too kind

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