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frozensoul
New Member

since 2000-11-09

Posts 3
AL

0 posted 2000-11-09 02:39 AM

Going Tripping

     Looking in my mirror
  The strangest things I see.
  It's a carnival of madness
    Going on inside of me.
Melting flowers falling,
   Falling from the sky.
Thunder clouds are rolling
     Then passing me by.
    Endless, bitter winter
     It gets so damn cold.
  Time keeps on ticking
   Making me feel old.
Drops of blood dripping,
Dripping from my eyes.
   My ears are ringing,
     Ringing with lies.
     The fire is burning;
    No ashes and no end.
    There's nothing left
  For me my dear friend.
    The tide is turning;
       Turning away.
          Life is dying.
       Dying everyday.
  I am slowly slipping;
      Slipping away.
I am always watching;
   Waiting for my ship.
    Now I am drowning.
Drowning without bliss.
        Are you feeling?
                         Are you feeling what I see?
        Are you going tripping;
     Tripping like me?

© by: T. L. Glenn
    1997

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

1 posted 2000-11-09 05:41 AM

Welcome to Dark Passions!

What a terrific poem! Loved the way you expressed things... and how it evoked the emotion. Love your style. Take care

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

2 posted 2000-11-09 10:58 AM

Welcome to Dark Passions!!! And I agree.... your style is great!

A wonderful first post. Keep writing

DkW

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-11-09 10:16 PM

Welcome to Passions!
This was a wonderful first post. I loved the ending especially!
Keep posting, i look forward to reading more of you!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 2000-11-10 08:19 PM

yep - feels like a normal day to me... WELCOME to Passions!

Chris

ThyWizard
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 56
Chambersburg, PA, USA

5 posted 2000-11-10 09:20 PM

loved it... unique style, really captured the chaos you were describing...Welcome To Passions

" If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown

Thy Wizard

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

6 posted 2000-11-11 02:14 PM

Gee ... this is good ... I really like this! Keep posting man!

~Verve

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

7 posted 2000-11-11 03:03 PM

I have tripped that trip toooo many times....I know what you see in the mirror...I've seen the same things.
...beth

MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

8 posted 2000-11-12 11:27 PM

that was sooo kewl...what a great style of writing too...great work..welcome to passions!
MiSeRyDivine

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

9 posted 2000-11-13 03:29 PM

great first post. welcome. looking forward to more.

jann elizabeth

If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them.
-1984

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2000-11-14 10:09 PM

Welcome to passions!! This was an incredible first post...amazing actually!! The ending was great...you really expressed all your pain into this one..i look forward to reading more!

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