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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-12-09 08:12 AM


Defeat


Last night/today I realized something,
the past few days have taught me a lesson.
One that will forever run through my veins,
seering my blood, rising it to a level that
makes me wonder why I haven't become ash.

Life isn't fair, I am not wallowing,
I am not wanting back what once was,
I know longer wish to have "status quo"
"No longer" is my quote for the day.
Defeated, checkmate has occurred.
They have won, not to become a loser, I'm
sitting here, until the last of everything
is swallowed and the caring is over.



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


© Copyright 2000 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Zyell
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since 2000-07-28
Posts 121
USA
1 posted 2000-12-09 05:24 PM


boy is that true, life is not fair....but
waiting until you no longer care, may be
a long wait. If you don't care, what is there, but maybe you mean just about particular people....take care, I hope
your problems get solved.

*S*
Z

"I am an abstract of Circles"

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-12-10 11:00 PM


Oh Wynter, this is a heartbreaker. Don't give up.
Love you
Sandra

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-12-11 04:33 AM


true, life isnt fair, I guess we just have to take each day as it comes.

Maree < !signature-->

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"



[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 12-11-2000).]

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
4 posted 2000-12-11 02:58 PM


Powerful. Felt it deep within my core.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
5 posted 2000-12-12 06:36 PM


Wonderful thoughts on this one. A great read and so very true.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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