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firecrakker
Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 235
Virginia

0 posted 2000-11-12 08:48 AM

Here I am
This small
insignificant
piece of your life
Watching
your magnificent
unfolding wings
Dreaming
you'll fly me away
Away from here
Wanting
to be something more
than afterthoughts
Loving
soft words and touch
..when convenient
Ready
to capture your heart
and love you
Here I am

Sheila 11/12/00

© Copyright 2000 Sheila Phillips - All Rights Reserved

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2000-11-12 02:51 PM

Very nice Shiela...James

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

2 posted 2000-11-12 03:55 PM

Very nice. I could feel the yearning in this one. It is well written, enjoyed it much.

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2000-11-12 11:55 PM

This was very beautiful!! I really liked it =o)

just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

4 posted 2000-11-13 12:23 PM

SUCKS WHEN WERE SUMTHING SO SMALL AND WISH TO BE SOMETHING BIGGER THEN LIFE HUH...GREAT POEM I FELT IT

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-11-13 10:11 PM

You know, whoever this is intended for should open up his eyes RIGHT NOW, and see the treasure he could have.
Awesome poem.
Sandra

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