Dark Poetry #2 |
The Abuse |
greentwin New Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 4 |
We see the pain in their eyes And do nothing. We hear the cry for help in their voice And we pretend to be deaf. We see the bruises on their body And we pretend to be blind. Help is just a call away And we pretend to be mute. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Welcome, Greentwin T’was a pleasure to read you posting, Like the way you pound the phrase, And we pretend to be Look forward see more of your work. Gloom |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... very thought provoking... WELCOME to DP! Good piece. ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to DP. And yes I understand this poem all to well. DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem and welcome to passions. this was a great first post! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I can relate all too well. well put words on a tender subject Suzanne |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Welcome to passions, Greentwin! And thank you for writing on a subject I, myself, feel strongly about. It's amazing how we tend to ignore the ugly and unwanted things in our culture, isn't it! Great work, here. Sheila * Life is a journey.. not a destination.. - unknown |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A very thought provoking first write, congrats. and welcome. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
While i myself can't relate too well to this... i have listened to a good frined of mine on the subject, and 1 person is 1 too many i think. An ugly side of society indeed... very well written piece though. In the few lines i felt so much emotion and anguish that it nearly brought tears to my eyes, very nice work. welcome to Passions. " If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown Thy Wizard |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
welcome welcome! hehe....i liked your poem...and its all true...sad, but true...look forward to reading more of ur work MiSeRyDivine |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome to passions! Unfortunately everything that you stated in this poem is a reality of every day life. It sux but you gotta face the truth...great job hun! |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
This is the sad truth. I fustrate myself for not doing anything. But that will change. Not right away, but it will. Happy future posting. Joy |
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