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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nothing was revealed So it is the emotionally unavailable game which you wish to play. Congratulations are in order for you have just found an expert on that very subject and we can start right away. Yes I said right away. You see I'm full of experience of my own in fact I even lived with a woman yet in essence she was all alone. That's right, I was as unavailable as they come. So all my feelings stayed hidden deep within twas against my agenda to let her in. I knew not how to share. I would never let her know how much I cared. So much easier to feel no feelings at all. Nothing to be revealed and leaving no thoughts to recall. And much easier to get along with a woman such as you cause the less we proceed to tell the more we seem to relate so well. You can rest assured nothing will be revealed on the unavailable emotions scale. On the other hand if your desire is to touch my heart if you are really yearning to give it a try then let's both open our hearts together and let our feelings learn to fly. Jameslee@November11,2000 |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
James... I can both feel and understand the frustration in this circumstance from the other side. Well done!! Sheila |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very open and honest, stating clearly frustration and an inner turmoil. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I liked it a lot. A wonderful way of expressing yourself.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The secrets of love (and everything) lie within. If she doesn't wish to share the inner and discover your inner, she is the loser here James not you. I know enough about you to know you need a female companion on EVERY level, not just the dating level. I'm sorry you are in this sort of situation for I know it is so painful... hugs* Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I'm sorry......this hurts me to read....all closed up and not feeling when that's what you want to do---feel. If she can't open up to you and stop playing these games then you don't need that.....is she trying to make you feel grateful that she allows you to be near her? Games are just crap in my opinion. You deserve better.  -SEA |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
wow...this was awesome...yea...i mean...you seem like a great person...you deserve better...great job on the poem..Much love~ MiSeRyDivine |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
AWWWWW GIVE IT A TRY AND GOOD LUCK |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
James, great poem my friend, oh how that describs my current way of thinking but i hope you let her in someday. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
YES give it a try. Open your heart and let the love flow out and vise versa. Great words of expressions!! DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks for the wonderful response...Actually I came out of a long relationship in which I wouldn't share my feelings and I saw the error of my ways so the next long relationship I opened up completely to let the cards fall where they may...problem was she wouldn't share her feelings...so I am still willing to share my feelings yet many of the women I meet are not so willing...and I wonder why some are and some are not...I feel like a butterfly when I am with a woman that simply shares her thoughts with me...when I am with a woman that keeps to herself I feel like I am doing something wrong to deserve that treatment...I yearn for a close relationship where we are both ready, willing and able to share out innermost thoughts, feelings and emotions...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's the ultimate question James. . . how much do we reveal about ourselves? the answer. . . you just have to know. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes it is wonderful to be able to share feelings of love..with someone deserving of your love..some still play hard to get.They think love is a game...Enjoyed James.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Yes James, I think we all want the ultimate relationship. Thats where the *soul mate* part somes in...(yes I am an ole romantic and still believe in this). Keep looking and dont stop opening your heart and soul up to a woman. One day you will find Ms. Right. I wish you all the luck in the world dear Friend!  DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sven, Victoria and Dark Kisses...I am very open with women I know and right now feel as if it is a learning experience for me because their was a time that I was not open...eventually I believe that I will find a balance...James |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I know these feelings well... -Tiersdin |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Lovely! Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
James, don't feel that you are doing something wron when people wont open up,it could be that they still havnt gotten to the place were you are now....showing your true self. take care "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I like this alot....I too, am like that---lay the cards on the table...perfect. You've got a beauty here. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
If you are honest with yourself, then it is easy to be honest with another. Just my finding though. Maybe that's why I'm single again!! LOL  Great write James! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Great poem...I wish you luck in finding the woman that is meant for you. |
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Dream Chaser Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 32South Carolina |
I only found this site two days ago. A friend "put me in touch". James, as I read your poem, I thought about my life. I live with a person who is unable or won't share his feelings with me. He never let's me in. Your poem touched me and gave me the courage to keep trying with him. Thanks. Keep up the good work. Angel |
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