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My Tale Be Told
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My Tale Be Told |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
The last stroke of midnight, The last breath of celestial light, Shrouded in an endless black cloak. The hands of time doth creep slow, The ambers of a dying flame ruefully glow, This eternity of deathless nights is growing old, I doth pray, my tale be told. The ghouls of this earth are wailing, The spirits of the night are revolting, The fairies of the heavens are mourning, This reality of divine dark madness is ending. The solitary starlight is fading, My damned afterlife is just beginning, But I doth only pray, my tale be told. [This message has been edited by Verve (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
ALmost a belated Halloween poem  Seriously, this is very deep, and made me think of a lot of different things. Last line is super powerful.. Sandra |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
divine....simply divine |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
HeY! Thank u so much for ur kind comments ... Itz truly appreciated! ~Verve |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
Had a medevil(not sure on spelling...lol) ring to it..very archaic, an interesting style. I agree to the idea that this was deep...i had the feeling there was something beyond the words...made me think of some pretty cool stuff...great piece... keep up the work " If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown Thy Wizard |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
..and what is your tale my friend? This was very somber and I enjoyed it. Jerm "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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