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Tears(haiku) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia 
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Tears flagrant winter winds frosty words slash the soul Tears make Icicles -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Tears can sting no matter what season it is...They can also be very theraputic. Enjoyed this. Take Care.. ~Sash~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
kitkat...this is a nice little haiku...I think tears can make icicles at any time, right inside - even though they can burn your cheeks.  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Perfection tears are indeed doubly cold physically and emotionally. Great stuff *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
very good!!! so full of imagery. loved it!! kynder "Full is not heavy as empty, not nearly, my love, not nearly...." Fiona Apple |
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