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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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The flowers died, their faded red petals and dried stems whisked away by the winter winds to an unknown destination; perhaps the same purgatory that claims the souls of the lonely. 11/9/00 |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Great comparison. I enjoy reading your work.. it makes me think. I look forward to reading more. Sheila |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you firecrakker  |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I like the analogy ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Yup i have to agree ... This is a good analogy. ~Verve |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great analogy.....i loved this!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you everyone |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
veery nice. today is the first truly cold day of the season here, and it really seemed to fit my mood. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nice metaphor... I like how you have given a sense of originality... sometimes short pieces say it all... good write KThe wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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