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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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I’m tired of existing within this sphere of the mundane; a place abhorred, where even fantasies are reduced to transparency, a wisp of vapor, fragile and immaterial. 11/9/00 |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Jonas... I felt exactly what you were describing here... written very well indeed  Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
how very very kewl...i really liked this poem! i loved your use of vocab! heheAll i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, it is so true, when your fantasies aren't even good anymore, things get pretty discouraging. Well said. Sandra |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
It may be short, but it doesn't lack a thing! I love the last lines starting with fantasies, for me it is those lines that bring out the power of this piece. |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
I've had to read this several times to be comfortable with how I respond. I know this feeling, but like the poem, to put a finger on the feeling's specifics, it licks lightly at the subconscious.. barely touching, but so familiar. I like the mental journey this piece sent me on.. well done. Always, Sheila |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Discouragin yes, but insignificant no! Jonas you have to believe that you were and are important. The powers that be put you here with some purpose in mind. None of us were accidents. The hard part is finding that purpose, it may take years, it may take a lifetime but keep looking for it, and don't lose heart.. *hugs* Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you everyone! I guess this poem is about how life sometime becomes stagnant. You are not moving backward or forward, just existing. |
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