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frozensoul New Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 3AL |
The walls drip red with blood and the roses thorn is bleeding through the paper with which i write the soft whispers i try to speak come out as violent screams i live in the shadows of darkness it appears that i am growing colder day by day. the light in which i was once lived is now long since gone it comes back from time to time in my tortured dreams and even now i wish to feel its warmth before i slowly die from wounds inflicted upon myself. Frozen "..in between the dark and the light there is a threshold, and it is there that you will find me." |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Excellent words! Yep yep tis me also.  DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sighing, with the knowledge of these feelings that seem to come and go...but are lessoning their visits each day. May the same happen to you {{huggzz)to warm your cold. ~Wynter Wishes "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey Frozensoul - welcome to Passions...nice to have you here. I notice your poem makes reference to suicide. The guideline's here prevent the posting of the act of, or glorification of suicide. However, Christopher has pointed out that this doesn't constitute glorification per se - and I tend to agree. If you feel the need to talk, please feel free to email me. I'd just like to post this link for you, however: /pip/guidelines.htm It's the Passion's guidelines and could be worth reading  Thanks Severn |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hey Frozen, I do like the rather dark imagery here ... I would say, almost chilling, in fact ... Do hope to see u posting a lot more. ~Verve |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was rather dark, but nonetheless good. Another great read.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Yes indeedy things can be construed the wrong way.... But this was a wonderful dark piece full of emotinal and physical imagery and well writen. Welcome also I nearly forgot that!! LOL Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
I have climbed the walls before possessed by such thoughts. I would like to think things are getting better, yet usually when I do, the carpet is pulled from under me. Great work here Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
lovin it n lovin it n lovin it...hehe...beautiful words...wickedly kewl... MiSeRyDivine |
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