Dark Poetry #2 |
Close Enough |
darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Close enough All I want to do Is be close enough to you To know that you really care To love you for who you are And know you’ll never be too far All I want to do Is be close enough to you To smell your cologne To never be alone To lay next to you on this bed When three words are said All I want to do Is be close enough to you But it will never be A missing factor that is key You don’t feel the same way Three little words you will never say All I want to do Is be close enough to you I’ll keep dreaming My hope still gleaming But you’ll just move on And my happiness with you has gone |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I know this oh so well. The best bet is to move on yourself. If your love is not good enough for her, then she isn't good enough for you. Find one that is. Good piece. G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
You know, this almost sounds like it's directed towards men, but I would be quick to say as one, I've been on this end of the stick too. Indeed the pain is felt here, by the writer, and the reader. Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this is beautiful darkstar |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow darkstar!! this is soooooo good!! you echo my heart, my thoughts. thank you for putting in down in word. i have not been able. such good work here. kynder "Full is not heavy as empty, not nearly, my love, not nearly...." Fiona Apple |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
this was really really gooood....beautifully put...i'm sowwie that you have to go through it though...you will find someone though...someone great! MiseryDivine |
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