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your_babydoll
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since 2000-10-12
Posts 13
ohio

0 posted 2000-11-13 07:59 PM


Alone i sit
and wait..

Slowly my mind fills with paranoid thoughts
fearing that i've lost you..
before you're even mine

Alone, I sit
and wait..

I put off my life for you
hoping you'll show up..
im almost numbed by the sadness.
hatred swallows my heart..
feeling nothing but the pain
then you come to me..
you show up with your adoring words
your sweet manner thaws my heart..for the short time that you stay.

Again you leave..
and
alone i sit
and wait..

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since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
CA, USA
1 posted 2000-11-14 12:43 PM


This is a very sad, but a true poem. I thank you for sharing it with us.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-11-14 03:55 AM


Ah...that circle...sometimes it is hard to avoid...

good write...

K

The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S

MidnightInTheGarden
New Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 2

3 posted 2000-11-14 05:17 PM


Sad poem, but good read thanks for the read.
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-11-14 05:31 PM


I do this quite a bit
and it never seems to work.
It is all about you
not the other...
go and get what you want
if it is not yours
keep looking.
Let me know if that works
ha...James

firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
5 posted 2000-11-14 09:57 PM


Ahaaaaaa~!~~  Know this feeling, well   But I have to agree with James. It's too easy to sit and wait and wonder and fear... and for what? Discover your heart..and find one that beats the same. To hell with the waiting. Great write!

Sheila

Life is a journey.. not a destination.. - unknown



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