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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-11-06 11:30 PM

I don't remember happiness,
Some say it has a peacefulness,
I don't remember love,
Some say it comes from above,
I don't remember the kiss,
That made me won't to not resist,
I don't remember the song,
That made me giddy all night long,
I don't remember the dream
That made me want to remember
I don't remember the words
That had me wishing for that sweet December,
I don't remember, oh but if I could.
But alas I don't remember.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-11-06 11:37 PM

Such a sad poem, but wonderful nonetheless. I really loved the ending too. A great poem!!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-11-07 04:09 AM

Ahh, the irony...

good thoughts here...

and nicely put together.

K

The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-11-07 01:12 PM

Thanks Dopey and Severn, sometimes a memory can really blur your future, alas if we would just not remember, so true Severn, a very ironic moment

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

4 posted 2000-11-07 09:09 PM

I sometimes think it's best not to remember.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-11-08 02:41 PM

I really like the way this was written, it's very good!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

6 posted 2000-11-08 11:00 PM

thank you so much Lakewalker, sometimes if we could forget sometimes it would really ease the mind, but often we thrive off of it like it's our best friend I do anyway.

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