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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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0 posted 2000-11-08 12:15 PM


Pain seems like a fine wine,
refined aging with time,
Pain deep within,
Wish it to leave though,
It settles to live,
Pain creeps through the seams
So all the world can tell
the disgrace,
Pain digs into the bone
cuts like knifes upon your gut,
Leaves scars that mar your fate,
Pain lingers never leaves
Unwelcomed, but still conceived
Pain always remembered.

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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2000-11-08 04:55 PM


Ouch.......yes pain always hurts no matter what kind it is. The worst of all is obviously emotional pain though.
Keap that head up!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-11-08 05:47 PM


It is amazing how little things can stir a memory, unfortunately, bad memories also. And the pain comes back, like a bad check. We put in the funds, someone withdrew them and we're stuck with the penalty.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



Rosebud1229
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3 posted 2000-11-08 10:57 PM


Dopey and Ron, I was thinking when I wrote it how often we remember the bad things so clearly, but yet toss the good memories away, sometimes I get caught up in the pain, I don't know why when I should dwell on the good things that builds us and molds us, but I guess it does take some of both.
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