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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-06 11:57 PM



Click here,
And be gone fear,
Don’t come hither,
For my soul will wither,
Insane you make,
When my sanity you take,
You took what you needed,
You left me feeling depleted.


Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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EagleOne
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1 posted 2000-10-07 09:43 AM


I think fear is probably the most interesting of all the emotions, certainly one of the most powerful!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

kynder
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2 posted 2000-11-06 08:57 PM


i talk to my fear too, noxious one.  excellent poem!!  

kynder

"Full is not heavy as
empty, not nearly, my love,
not nearly...."

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3 posted 2000-11-07 12:12 PM


Beware........yes.....i think the ones we should fear are the fearless eh?



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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Severn
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4 posted 2000-11-07 08:13 PM


'You took what you needed,
You left me feeling depleted.'

Yeah...and this I understand...

so can many I think

good work, Xeonox

K

The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S

Ron K. Fox
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5 posted 2000-11-07 08:45 PM


I can understand this all too well...drained off and left with nothing but memories.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



Rosebud1229
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6 posted 2000-11-08 11:04 PM


fear has a way of sticking around, making you frown, bring you down, fear grows into dispair, fear just plays with you until it gets a grip on you, a very nice poem here.
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