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Bring It To Me
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Bring It To Me |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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Bring it to me Put it in my hand Give me the power And watch as it flowers I fear it not Tasting the challenge When I think Giving you your brink Asking to drink Daring to stand Venture in forbidden land Valleys at my feet Blooms of demands Hissed through clenched teeth Fits like a glove Sweet bizarre this love *****kynder "Full is not heavy as empty, not nearly, my love, not nearly...." Fiona Apple |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ooh, very interesting, I like this, has a demanding sound, yet almost romantic, in an unfulfilled kind of way. Peace Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
this is a bookend to xenox's poem...you guys must be along the same wave length...cool piece...message is up front Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful......i liked it very much  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Love - tis an odd thing. And it's funny - it does hold its own curious power doesn't it? Good work here... K The wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i really liked this. it was mysterious and enchanting. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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