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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Fate is not, what is to come. It is what, I've already done. Life is not, a chance to take. It is the choices, that I make. Open circuits click closed, but then, you can never, go home again. Click |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow this was good!!! Life is not, a chance to take. It is the choices, that I make. What a choice of words!!!Loved it though!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow... "Fate is not, what is to come. It is what, I've already done." You really think so? Fate is everythign that happend and will happen next I think... fate is a plan from above, our destination... Loved it though, some philosophy  I really like talking and contemplating about destiny and things like that. Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Click, you were really switched on with this poem. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woah! Tremendous poem here Click! Yes, fate is what you've already done... 'cause in one way, you determine your own fate by your own choices... I liked this one! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is a cool poem, indeed. It's almost like a proverb! Life is not, a chance to take. It is the choices, that I make. I liked that stanza the most. Very wise words. It sort of reminds me of another saying that I've heard "Luck is a loser's excuse for a winner's position." We all need to take control of our destiny, or else we'll get nowhere. We'll just complain about the system and all that, lol. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
simply outstanding click. thank you for sharing. missed you and didn't even know it. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
very nice click I enjoy reading your stuff. Suzanne |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I'm another one to prove that you can never go home again. I tried.. Good stuff, Click. Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I agrre with you on fate being what we have already done...because evrything past has led to this moment...I wrote in another poem Will my every action cause a reaction? Will the dominoes fall, one upon another, With each deed I do, right or wrong? which goes with your Fate is not, what is to come. It is what, I've already done so I can definetly relate with your logic. Ron < !signature--> Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A great poem. Much appreciated read!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i've really enjoyed all of your short poems that i've seen today, but i think this is my favorite. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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