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Jose Marti
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washing DC

0 posted 2000-11-05 11:56 PM


I apologize for stealing any of DMX's lyrics here


1…
2…
meet me outside
bout to tear a a big gaping hole
in your chest
you shouldn't have touched me there
only girls can do that
now we'll meet in the alley behind the club
you gonna die as a matter of fact
don't need the blades
and I need no ghat
my fists,
and some kung-fu will suffice
cause I don't need to slice
don't care if you're drunk
no excuses
too late for that
you did it once again,
now I'll cave your skull,
and break your chest in
you won't even get an open casket.

© Copyright 2000 Jose Marti - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
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Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-11-06 12:28 PM


ECK!!!!!!  

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-11-06 01:01 AM


I think dark said it all for me



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Jose Marti
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3 posted 2000-11-06 01:28 AM


I ORIGINALLY WROTE THIS ONE NIGHT AFTER RETURNING FROM A CLUB. THIS LITTLE DRUNK GUY HAD BEEN TOUCHING ME WAY TOO MUCH. THAT NIGHT I FOUND OUT THAT THAT THIS CLUB HAS A LOT MORE BOUNCERS THAN I THOUGHT. I USED THE DMX LYRICS IN THE BEGINING BECAUSE HIS SONG CAPTURES THE EXACT EMOTION AND INTENSITY OF IT THAT I FELT.
Dark_kisses_Within
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Kansas
4 posted 2000-11-06 03:50 PM


Well let me just act like the OLD person  (29) that I am and say this.....It takes a much stronger person to walk away than to fight with your fists.  There are so many diseases out there , that you may never know what you may get during the fight.  To walk away and ignore others when they are being childish shows that you are very mature. Yes I know there are times that walking away doesnt solve the matter in hand.  But use good judgement!  
DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Jose Marti
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5 posted 2000-11-08 04:49 PM


He was not childish, he was drunk.
This is the kind of situation causes people to react first and think about it later. What diseases are you referring to? i don't know what you mean.

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