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An apparition from the past
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An apparition from the past |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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Sitting in the dark alone Trying to remember While the tears run down my cheeks The taste of your faithless kiss A fading memory of what used to be Confused I wonder what 'tis I really miss Could it be I long for a ficticious fantasy But whatever we had I never wanted it to end And who's to blame Was it you or me who made the kill Or was it him, the slimy snake The serpent in our own garden of eden Oh well, it doesn't matter anymore It's all over anyway But God how I miss the feeling! It was happiness and misery in perfect harmony It was you and me, a perfect match Seemed like nothing could ever part us Like no-one in the world could ever harm us Yet we were smashed apart And now I would give anything For it to become the way it used to be To turn back time and fall in love again To sink deep into your loving arms But hopelessly I realize I'll have to spend eternity in misery Pining for you my sweet one My one and only love I'll never find anyone to replace you Never I'll be the same again And I can never find it in my heart to forgive myself For losing you My bride of bliss and darkness |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Broken, this si so lovingly sad and beautiful!! Some where, some how, in some time the love will reach out to you again from some one you least expect. My grandmother always told me...when you are not looking and least expecting...love will find you. Until... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I agree with a-alibaster that this is sad. This is a VERY sad poem and it is sad because it is a perfect mirror of how breaking up with someone you were close to feels. That feeling is SO sad... I can't agree that everything comes alright in the end though... I've found you can never fully forget when you have been that close to someone. You look back and STILL regret. But someone else does fill most of the space that is left, in the end... |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Broken, I have to agree with the others. How very sad this is. Very beautiful though. Take care, Juls |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Thanks for your replies, they mean alot to me. It's nice to feel apreciated. ~Broken~ A crimson pool, so warm and deep Lulls me to an endless sleep Your hand in mine, -I will be brave Take me from this earth An endless night,-thi |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I'm lost in awe Broken...this is amazing. This hits home...I mean like right on the mark...so I can tell you honestly that although this person will always remain in your memory..you'll find someone else to love. I can promise you that...just give yourself some time and patience will do the rest. Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! A great poem!  My bride of bliss and darkness -- terrific line! and ending. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Loved the poem. Hope you can move on. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Thank you all for your relies, they mean a great deal to me!! You keep me hanging on. ~Broken~ Oh God! Why the angels fall first? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A wonderful poem. Sad, but nonetheless very beautiful.....keep that head up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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