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No More Pain |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
No More Pain Why is their pain in my heart? I only wish for happiness Neither love nor joy is in my live To end it I think of now Sorrow and Sadness consume My pitiful live without remorse Perhaps death will help So I will feel No more Pain… I walk among the living Yet I am dead inside Feeling desolated and alone The pain is my only companion My Rage ravages on Inside my broken and torn heart I wish to die slowly And never I wish to live Death will make me feel Alive again And there will be forever No More Pain < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Broken_Heart (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
You express emotion well, perhaps a little more structure to the poem would focus it even finer. Gloom |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
If this is about you, I care that you are feeling so much pain, and there are so many reasons to stay alive!! There is light at the end of the tunnel, I promise, Im glad your here at the family of DP to share in your emotions, everyone here cares Im sure. Your emotions very well expressed in this poem! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Yeah I have total sympathy for you here. Cause I know the feeling too well. Walking around the living yet feel dead inside. Boy oh boy do I know that feeling! But each day I take a step forward, as should you. Great poem btw. Take care and remember to keep taking that deep breathe, DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
Please, please, please, listen to me. I have been there and am still there although less than I was initially. In hard times, the times that make you feel that life is full of teases, the times that make you feel that you will always feel this way and nothing will ever change.. in all those times of endless tears... there are breaks, and good WILL come out of bad. I guarantee. You have a talant that is not worth throwing away ever. You were given the ability to write as a therepy as a salvation and as a gift to others who can read, appreciate and relate. You are bigger than anything you encounter. I don't mean to sound like some sort of preacher... but I saw myself in what I just read.. and you need to know that I am here now, because I let myself see what there is within me, outside of hurt.. I think you need to do the same. I have 2 poems I think you should read. Both can be found on my homepage (listed in my profile) "Pain" and "The Wheel" The first one you will relate to and I will assure you I felt it 100% when I wrote it.. and then mere days later... came a little hope and acceptance expressed in "The Wheel" Please check them out. Sorry about all that seriousness....you have an incredible talant and can't wait to read more from you. -Jes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes the pain seems overwhelming in our lives especially if we are going thru stressful events such as a divorce, a death in our family or of a friend. There is hope that life will get better down the road. We need to look past the pain for the opportunities. I am posting "Someone who cares" in op 9 to encourage a friend that also seems to be stuck in pain...Hope you can find something to bring a smile to your face...life is not all pain......take care..James |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
This is very very sad, and maybe that's why I can relate to it so well and like it so much. Loved the end.. **** I wish to die slowly And never I wish to live Death will make me feel Alive again And there will be forever No More Pain **** Take care ~Broken~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was so sad......I relate to this poem completely. Sad to say that death is the last scapegoat to immense depression and suffering. Hopefully none of us will take it ever.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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