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Dark Poetry #2

Bargain with the Devil

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2000-11-03 10:59 AM

Accidental mental lapse,
caused by the rebirth
of reluctant convictions,
and my stomach lurches
with the sickening drop
of necessary acceptance;
a one way ticket
on the neuron express,
straight down.

11/2/00

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

1 posted 2000-11-03 10:38 PM

this is rockin'. very good. felt the drop all the way
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Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-03-2000).]

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 2000-11-04 12:50 PM

So you've met my ex-wife too!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-11-04 12:54 PM

hahaha chistopher is funny.
Anyway i think the poem rocks. Keep it up!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

4 posted 2000-11-05 08:49 PM

Thanks Ron. Glad you enjoyed!

Christopher - ROFL!

Dopey, my thanks to you for reading

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