Dark Poetry #2 |
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I Lost The Dream |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas ![]() |
I Lost The DreamI lost the dream the other day just as the sun fell from the sky. I lost my way on the only path that connected you and I. I fell down twice and got up once, that's when I started to cry, oh God I screamed and screamed again, why did she have to die. w. james beard, jr. ...not for me, but another. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ouch C |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I fell down twice and got up once, Glad it wasn't you...but I definetly felt it. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...James |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, very powerful. Sandra |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
great ending. You took me my surprise. ![]() Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Very touching... the end really got me. ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Wow.... I have to agree with catalina..very powerful! Sheila |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
strong writing, James...deeply felt ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*tear* Very sad....Very Very Very sad...... "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
BRAVO BRAVO ![]() |
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