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carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

0 posted 2000-10-30 02:19 AM

inside a dream of usual tides
comes sacred lectures within this time
relieving a tired soul she asks
am i ready
can i get it done
and if i do
can she pass
if i run through the hearts of the many and find nothing
can i dream
will something as beautiful as breakfast
be lost within egos (?spelling)
can a sun shine always
inside a poet's nightmare
she hurt me bad
can i be, can what i've known see
hurt is, and has been a state of
not my soul, hell no
not my friends, gottit together
i finally know
speculation spills the air
i've never failed to care
where did this start
i'm always the last to know

Peace, Love, and Happiness
J.L. Koehler

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

1 posted 2000-10-30 05:20 AM

Nicely written

"where did this start
i'm always the last to know"

Take care!

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-30 09:50 AM

speculation spills the air
i've never failed to care
where did this start
i'm always the last to know

Great lines indeed...excellent. those are my favorite. always the best. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

3 posted 2000-10-31 02:30 AM

I don't usually relive the poem with a reply, and I thank the two that have.

"Friends like these don't come along often, and I'm too old to feel the next"

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2000-11-04 06:36 AM

can a sun shine always
inside a poet's nightmare

well said...actually a very beautiful thought

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-11-05 01:01 AM

I like the title a lot. I think this poem is nicely written and thought up. Good job, hope to see you post more.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-11-05 08:46 PM

Loved the tone and feel of this, like introspective pacing--a sincere ponderance of self and life. Enjoyed this much.

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