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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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What Ifs' cold words do I hear. emptiness resides there. not knowing, still caring but why? is it useless to think? is one foolish to sink into a world of what if's? should one try? is one trying too hard, removing whats been charred by the fire that's burning within? is the charring from hurt being treated like dirt or desires of skin touching skin? ~Wynter |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Wynter.. This being one of the first I've read from you, I must say I'm very impressed!  . The last question really burned in my mind, though..is the charring from hurt being treated like dirt or desires of skin touching skin? I sometimes feel that the answer is both.. simultaneously... I look forward to reading more. Sheila |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I agree with sheila...it can be both at the same time...and when you think about it, how can it not be? Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sheila- I am pleased you stopped to respond...and yes these questions arise in me often. Ron- you are right, both of you...thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
I agree also. This was so amazing to read. Everything flowed beautifuly. Great Job done here. DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Interesting! I once built a world out of "what ifs" - and ended up with only "may have beens" Chris |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The format of the poem rocks. The may have been's and the what if's.......eh?......interesting concepts. I usually reside within the mighta-coulda-shoulda-woulda-but-oh-wouldya-please-pass-the-mayo-ok-adios-abeen's make sense? not really but that's ok  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
DkW- thank you, I am happy you enjoyed the flow. Christopher- yes those may have beens may be worse than what if's...thank you for peeking in. D_D- I don't know why but your responses make me smile and laugh, a needed combination. Thanks~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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