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firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

0 posted 2000-11-02 10:23 PM

Trying to find pleasure
From so much pain,
Desperately wanting normalcy
Being driven insane.
Searching for passion
And emotions that are real,
Seeking out a cure
Invisible scars not healed.
I want to taste sweat
Other than my own,
To feel the friction
Of a love that's grown.
Abduct me in the night
Possess my blood and tears,
Cut out this injured heart
And relieve my fears.
Tear the bubbling flesh
With your intimate eyes,
Tell me it's not sadness
That lingers in your cries.
Bound me in chains
Of emotional bliss,
When I am alone
I want it to be you I miss.
Thief my soul
Let two become one,
Digest my fantasies
When all is said and done.
Give me forever
If such a thing is true,
Let me feel at ease
For loving you.
Grasp my deepest core
And hold on tight,
Mostly what I desire
Your dark kisses in the night.

Jeremy T. Sellers
11/2/00
9:46 PM
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"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

[This message has been edited by firejerm (edited 11-02-2000).]

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2000-11-03 12:00 PM

EXCELLENT!! This poem was written with such heart and emotion! You out did yourself here my friend!

Abduct me in the night
Possess my blood and tears,
Cut out this injured heart
And relieve my fears.

Great words here, Loved it!!

DkW

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

firecrakker
Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 235
Virginia

2 posted 2000-11-03 10:53 AM

I have to say, this is one of your best, yet. There is desperation, but it is filled with hope.. Great piece!

Sheila

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-11-04 01:19 AM

This was one of my best reads ever on this forum. Great job and i hope to see more.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

4 posted 2000-11-04 08:03 AM

This is excellent....

I can relate to your words, every single one of them.

...beth

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-11-04 08:36 AM

Awesome poetry, Jeremy. You said it all, and very beautifully, heartbreakingly real.
Sandra

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