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firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

0 posted 2000-11-02 10:23 PM

Trying to find pleasure
From so much pain,
Desperately wanting normalcy
Being driven insane.
Searching for passion
And emotions that are real,
Seeking out a cure
Invisible scars not healed.
I want to taste sweat
Other than my own,
To feel the friction
Of a love that's grown.
Abduct me in the night
Possess my blood and tears,
Cut out this injured heart
And relieve my fears.
Tear the bubbling flesh
With your intimate eyes,
Tell me it's not sadness
That lingers in your cries.
Bound me in chains
Of emotional bliss,
When I am alone
I want it to be you I miss.
Thief my soul
Let two become one,
Digest my fantasies
When all is said and done.
Give me forever
If such a thing is true,
Let me feel at ease
For loving you.
Grasp my deepest core
And hold on tight,
Mostly what I desire
Your dark kisses in the night.

Jeremy T. Sellers
11/2/00
9:46 PM

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2000-11-03 02:59 PM

~sighing~ I loved this!!

~Wynter Bliss

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-11-04 01:15 AM

I think the formatting of this poem rocked. I liked this poem a lot and hope to see more of you.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2000-11-04 09:21 AM

Hi, I just wrote something on this poem a half hour ago, it appears to be a no show, so here I am again. Anyway, I loved it!
Sandra

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

4 posted 2000-11-04 10:03 AM

Enjoyed it so much!!!!!
"Abduct me in the night
Possess my blood and tears,
Cut out this injured heart
And relieve my fears.
Tear the bubbling flesh
With your intimate eyes,
Tell me it's not sadness
That lingers in your cries."

Great stuff!

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

5 posted 2000-11-04 12:40 PM

HEY, something really strange happened here, a lot of people replied to this one, but either their replies are gone, or they've been changed, what gives?

Cyndey
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 84
Arkansas

6 posted 2000-11-04 11:04 PM

Jeremy,
gosh that poem is absolutely wonderful!! I loved it! Truely a masterpiece! Your work as always astounds me fully!

When I am alone
I want it to be you I miss.
Thief my soul
Let two become one,
Digest my fantasies
When all is said and done.
Give me forever
If such a thing is true,
Let me feel at ease
For loving you.
Grasp my deepest core
And hold on tight,
Mostly what I desire
Your dark kisses in the night.

awhh yea, I know I can relate to those words!

Great work my friend,

blessed be!

Cyndey

"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

7 posted 2000-11-05 11:29 AM

Loved the journey this took me on Jeremy

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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