Dark Poetry #2 |
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Sven...When Tears Won't Listen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
When Tears Won't Listen...for Sven Often times in memories hold, The flow begins it's reign. The stars begin to fall from grace, As teardrops on cheeks stain. The night sky in it's silent state, Bemoans for burst of light, When come the morn with sunshine's rays, To blanket dark of night. Upon the dew of each new day, I trust no tears will fall. Yet sometimes even without cause, They hear a heartened call. And even though I wish to pause, Removing any doubt, These tears won't listen when my heart, In loving words, cries out. ~Wynter Bliss *thank you for the inspiring title words "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful writing here hon, I'm sure Sven will love it!! ![]() isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A great inspiration from a great guy. beautiful work. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you Wynter. . . this is wonderful. . . I'm honored that I was able to inspire you. . . Thank you again my friend. . . ![]() -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love this, Wynter. And Sven is a great inspiration to us all, hm? Why won't the tears listen, anyway? Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Isis-Thank you, I enjoyed his line and it was so soft and perfect to ispire me after a day of uncontrollable tears myself. ![]() Ron- inspiration comes easy to one who reads such wonderful words on here. Thank you Ron...you will be next. ![]() ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven- your words inspire many, and it is I that is greatful for the chance to"use" them. huggz my new friend. ![]() ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sandra- I believe I am going through something similar to you, maybe a little more permanent and with a lot more negative consequences to it. And I also know how those tears won't listen when they begin to flow and the mind won't shut out the hurt and pain. It is a roller coaster ride we are on at the moment and I, too, want to get off, if only someone could stop it. Hope this wasn't being too personal. huggz and a big Thank you for your visit. sending you ~Wynter's warmth "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
This is so beautifull, I'm glad I found it. It really is an inspiring phrase. Take Care! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you LM, I appreciate your visit and kind words ![]() ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
HOLY! This was amazing. I thought it was great. I can't believe you write so well. ![]() "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
D_D, your expressions bring a huge smile to my face...always. Thank you ~Wynter< !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Wynters Bliss, This is awesome so very beautiful, you have much talent, and I know Sven loved it. Man I just loved this one thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Cerenity, your words always please me. Thank you, huggz. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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